New Project

This past weekend was productive.  I began work on the outline to my next novel.  I’ve been fiddling around with something since May, when I finished The Spanish Bride.  I was exhausted, burned out, just plain not interested.  I still seem to be caught in some kind of writer’s block about short stories, but I spun out nearly ten pages of single-spaced outline for the sequel to Orleans.  There is the slightly-better-than-remote possibility that Orleans could get picked up, and if so then I will nned to write the rest of the trilogy.

Oculus will pick up pretty much where Orleans left off.  (Yes, the titles are all “O” titles, including the overall title of the trilogy, which is the Oxun Trilogy.  Oxun is the South American river goddess, the only female of the bunch that outwitted the boys and became just as if not more powerful than the others.  I’m using it as a metaphor rather than a plot device, but she just might turn up somewhere along the line anyway.)

It feels good to be writing something again.  Other than grant proposals, blog posts, and assorted newsletter stuff.

Couple of things I need that will be difficult to find.

A substantial part of the background of these novels (alternate history) deals with Germaine de Stael.  Google her, quite a woman.  The only woman who ever frightened Napoleon.  But he wouldn’t have her just killed.  He exiled her, banished her, had his secret police at one point chase her all over Europe and into Russia…anyway, I became fascinated with her.  I’ve got her memoir about her exile, a book of her philosophical and political writings, a solid biography, etc.  As with most such projects, it is the most unlikely little details that can hang you up.

Her father, Jacques Necker (google him, too—this family was important) at one point bought 38,000 acres in New York.  Germaine herself added to it and, according to the biography I have, “came to own a substantial part of upstate New York.  But of course I haven’t been able to pin her holdings down.  I probably could if I went to Albany and septn a weekend or more in their public records archive, etc.  I probably won’t do that.  I’ve looked at a map, I’ve seen what upstate New York contains, and just decided where her holdings would have been. Part of the action of the novel takes place in Saranac Lake and vicinity.  Lot of French town names around there.  Seems a safe bet.

Anyway, it would be nice to know specifically where her holdings were.  If anyone reads this and has a way of finding this out, please email me at  info@marktiedemann.com

A minor side issue to this.  There is a largish island in Upper Lake Saranac.  It’d be nice to know a little about it.  I’ll track some of this down eventually myself, but I thought I’d ask.

I’ve been stewing in my own juices most of this year.  Time to get off my butt and write something new.  Stay tuned.

Why I Write

From time to time someone asks me (as, no doubt, they ask other writers) why I do it.  Why, specifically, I write fiction as opposed to nonfiction.  It really is hard to explain to those who seem tone-deaf to what we call Art.  Sometimes it’s hard to explain to yourself.  The short answer for me is that I love it.  I love creating stories and weird stuff and making up plots, because I always loved stories.  (When I was a kid, I’d watch movies in which a group of people are thrust into a really cool adventure and at some point one of them would talk about wanting to just go home and having everything return to normal.  And, as a kid, I’d think why would you want to do that?  Can’t you see that what you’re doing now is so much cooler than going back to a dull life?  That was a kid talking, of course, because the stories were in fact so much cooler than what passed for my “real life.”  It’s only later that you realize that part of your “real” life was the freedom to indulge stories, pretend, and thrust yourself—quite safely—into adventures.)  Telling stories just felt like the coolest thing to do.

But then you grow up and actually try to do it and if you stick with it long enough to discover all sorts of other aspects to it that you couldn’t imagine as a kid just looking for a neat ride.  And that’s the art.  And that is hard to describe to people who don’t read fiction, who don’t Get It.

Dan Simmons wrote a novel called The Crook Factory about Ernest Hemingway in WWII.  He lived in Cuba then and he ran an amateur spy ring, hunting submarines, for a time.  This much is true.  Simmons built a very intricate and thrilling novel around it.  His viewpoint character, though, is a FBI agent who is one of those with the tin ear, who doesn’t Get It, why someone would write fiction.

Late in the novel they have a conversation about it.  Here is part of it.

“Why do you do it?”

“Do what?

“Write fiction rather than write about true things.”

Hemingway shook his head.  “It’s hard to be a great writer, Lucas, if you love the world and living in it and you love special people.  It’s even harder when you love so many places.  You can’t just transcribe things from the outside in, that’s photography.  You have to do it the way Cezanne did, from inside yourself.  That’s art.  You have to do it from inside yourself.  Do you understand?”

“No.”

Hemingway sighed softly and nodded.  “It’s like listening to people,  LUcas.  If their experiences are vivid, they become a part of you, whether or not their stories are bullshit or not.  It doesn’t matter.  After a while, their experiences get to be more vivid than your own.  Then you mix it all together.  You invent from your own life stories and from all of theirs, and after a while it doesn’t matter which is which…what’s yours and what’s theirs, what was true and what was bullshit.  It’s all true then.  It’s the country you know, and the weather.  Everyone you know…the trick in fiction is like the trick in packing a boat just so without losing trim.  There are a thousand intangibles that have to be crammed into every sentence.  Most of it should not visible, just suggested…

“Anyway, the…trick is to write truer than true.  And that’s why I write fiction rather than fact.”

That’s one way to describe it.  I didn’t realize truth had anything to do with it until I read an Algis Budrys review of a Gene Wolfe novel.  He said of Wolfe that he told the truth well.  I puzzled over that for a time before it clicked.  I’d been saying something of the sort for a long time concerning philosophy—that there’s truth and then there’s fact.  Occasionally the two meet and become tangled up and are in many respects the same thing, but mostly there are facts, which have no meaning.  Truth is the meaning, which must be derived or extrapolated from fact.  Which led me to the conclusion that Truth is a process, an ongoing experience of recognition.  One of the places I’ve found it has been in good fiction.

I don’t know if Hemingway ever actually said the above—it sounds like something he would have said, though, which makes it true, whether there is the fact of it or not.  And that is what fiction does.

Smart Novels

Recently I had a conversation with a friend who told me about the latest rejection of her novel (by an agent).  There was nothing but praise from the agent, but ultimately the verdict came down to “This book is just too smart to sell.”

Much scratching of head and muttered curses ensued and I sympathized.  I’ve read the book in question and it is indeed a smart book.  Very smart.  It’s one of the rare examples of a novel that, from time to time, we hear about from an author in his or her cups complaining of being ignored by the publishing industry with the final dismissal of “Well, I’m just too good for them.”  The natural reaction to this is an unspoken “Yeah, right” and then move on to the next subject.

But I’ve come to believe that in a few instances, this is exactly true.

Agent and publisher have one problem in common—how to sell a book.  The agent must sell it to the publisher who must sell it to you, the general public.  In pursuit of this, much time and skull sweat is spent trying to figure out—to divine—what will sell.  It’s nigh unto an impossible task and usually the publisher puts work out, crosses collective fingers, and hopes for the best.

Except in some instances where they are convinced they have a Winner and then extra effort is put into the book—sales-wise.  A campaign is mounted.  There is advertising.  Reviews are purchased (yes, Virginia, reviews can be bought).  An author tour is undertaken and underwritten.  Radio interviews, and if things look especially good some local television.  Attempts are made to transform the author into a Personality.

Certain sometimes vague common denominators about such a book must be in place, however.  The all-elusive Accessibility about sums it up.  It must be popular, which means that readers with a reading ability of about the eighth-grade must be appealed to.  (Perhaps I exaggerate a little, but just look at best sellers and the level of writing they exhibit.  Never mind subject matter, that’s not what I’m talking about.  I’m talking about vocabulary and depth.)

Which brings me to my point.  Some novels may well be considered “too good” for the publishing mills.  And by that I mean they require something from the reader.  They demand a bit more attention, a bit more commitment, a bit more general background education.  They require that the reader step up to the plate prepared to participate in the reading experience at a level approaching that which the writer had in writing it.  They elicit a projicient extrospective perspicacity on the part of the reader equal if not superior to the proffered text.

In short, you might have to do a little work to really enjoy the book.

Granted, some novels are abstruse to the point of diminishing returns  (Finnegan’s Wake, Moderan) while others hide their cleverness beneath prose so under-challenging that whatever message may have been there is overlooked (most Kurt Vonnegut, in my most humble opinion, but The Old Man and the Sea certainly).

We have a legacy of smart novels from the age when The Novel was the chief entertainment of a book buying class that possessed both vocabulary and philosophical depth.  Which is why today we still find exceptional work published.

But seldom from new writers.

Don’t get me wrong, I am not for a moment condeming any new writers.  Excellent work comes out all the time from new writers.  But there is a level of intellectual conformism in style and approach that makes the rare “smart” novel something of an oddity.  For every Donna Tartt, how many Ken Folletts get published?  For every Matt Ruff or John Crowley, how many Dan Simmons or Jasper Ffordes get published.  For every Guy Davenport, Umberto Eco….

Anyway, this is not to slam any writer who produces good work that is in some way “safe” by virtue of being accessible.  Nor is it to say that the novels of which I speak don’t ever get published.  Obviously they do.  Sometimes you have to find them from obscure little publishers tucked off in the corner of East Erudite or some such, or they get lucky enough to find a smart imprint within a larger consortium.

But how often do they sell well?  How often are they really promoted?  And how many rejections do they garner before finding a Believer who takes the chance?

These are books that do not compromise.  Now, no writer intentionally compromises, and this is really not about the writer anyway.  What it is about is a mindset in the publishing industry that would bar a Thomas Pynchon if he came on the scene brand new today because no one would know “how to market it.”  I’m talking about an attitude on the part of the gatekeepers that predetermines what would be “too smart” for the reading public.

Which all comes down to the ledger.  What is being said is not that the book isn’t worth publishing, but that the publisher can only conceive of a small audience for it, which makes it not worth while.

Or some such nonsense.

Smart novels that get readily snapped up, it seems to me, wear a cloak of something else that the publisher recognizes as salable.  Something that can be reduced to a one-line sales pitch.  This may be how a lot of smart writers get themselves to the point where they can start writing that wholly unclassifiable, “too good to be published” work that is their true forte (consider William Gibson).  Michael Chabon is doing interesting, unclassifiable work (smart work) now, but his first couple of novels, while smart on one level, wore an overcoat of relative conventionality (Mysteries of Pittsburgh, Wonderboys).  He makes money now, he can publish what he wants.

Finally, though, this is a cop-out.  The agent (or publisher) is basically admitting to a lack of imagination or energy or both.  What they’re saying is that, in the market as it exists today, it would be too damn much effort for them to sell this book, because, well, it is clearly good, it is clearly worthy, but it is also clearly over the heads of the sales department.  It is a confession of surrender to the fact that The Market has beaten them into submission with its apparent demands for more of the same pabulum that fills supermarket book shelves.  (You’d never see William Gaddis shelved in the local QuickMart next to John Grisham.)

So next time you hear the phrase “my novel was too good for them”—pause.  One or two percent of those people may be telling the unadorned truth.  They might actually be someone with something worth reading.

But only one or two percent.

I’d be perfectly happy to be convinced that this is not really the case.  In fact, I do believe that if the writer perseveres, eventually good work gets published.  But the playing field is anything but level.

Odd Bits

“The historian of manners obeys harsher laws than those that bind the historian of facts.  He must make everything seem plausible, even the Truth; whereas in the domain of history properly so-called, the impossible is justified by the fact that it occurred.”  Honore de Balzac

The central paradox of contemporary Christian fundamentalism is its spin on the message that the world and its concerns are irrelevant, and that soon, very soon, it will all pass away—and then turning around and making temporal behavior the basis for an ongoing political activism that is just shy of fascistic.

“His heart was a purple castle.  It lay in a rock-strewn desert, concealed by dunes, surrounded by a marshy oasis, and set behind stone walls.  It could be reached only from the air.  It had a thousand private rooms and a thousand underground chambers and a thousand elegant salons, among them one with a purple sofa…”  Patrick Suskind Perfume

Within 50 years after 1590, 1200 plays were presented in London—900 written by 50 professional playwrights.

And Again….

“Once people envisioned the possibility of change in a fixed order, the end of an age of submission came in sight, the turn to individual conscience lay ahead.  To that extent the Black Death may have been the unrecognized beginning of modern man.”  Barbara Tuchman

“…a total of 15 certificates of achievement and decoration verified his integrity and competence for all the world to see.  On some days he would haze at the rows of his awards in smug satisfaction.  On others, he would search within the frames for some proof that he was a good man.”  Michael D. Weaver, Mercedes Nights

“Somewhere in somebody’s sacred scripture it says: ‘And there shall be caused to be built dark alleys wherein the mockers and the unrighteous shall in their turn have their heads laid open and in likewise their fat lips busted; and even this shall be pleasing in the sight of Heaven.'”  George Alec Effinger, Marid Audran When Gravity Fails

Today’s Quotes

In a way, doing these are a way to not have to think of something original to write.  On the other hand, some of these I made up to begin with, so originality isn’t the problem.  Anyway, a few more.

Most correlations are noncausal; when correlations are causal, the fact and the strength of the correlation rarely specify the nature of the cause.

“The tendency has always been strong to believe that whatever received a name must be an entity or being, having an independent existence of its own.  And if no real entity answering to the name could be found, men did not for that reason suppose that none existed, but imagined that it was something peculiarly abstruse and mysterious.”  John Stuart Mill

“Apart from logical agency, there is to me something a little odd about the ethical valuations of those who think that an omnipotent, omniscient, and benevolent Deity, after preparing the ground by many millions of years of lifeless nebulae, would consider himself adequately rewarded by the final emergence of Hitler and Stalin and the H-Bomb.”  Betrand Russell

Little Lost Book

We returned home one year from a worldcon (world science fiction convention, for those who may not know the nomenclature)—I forget which year—and promptly I lost a book. Or a box of books. You see, we’d early on gotten into the habit of mailing our purchases home rather than try to take boxes of books on the plane. (The first worldcon we went to in 1984 resulted in about three hefty boxes going back, all of which cost around a hundred and fifty dollars. Today that much would fit in one (small) box.) This system worked pretty well until this time. I think it must have been Chicago in 2000.

We—I—misplaced a box. So I thought. We were rearranging the house once again, moving things from one place another, and along the way I thought this one box of books had disappeared. Oh, it was in the house, certainly, buried inadvertently, and one year it would reappear. But it never did, not even through subsequent house cleanings.

Over time the contents of this box took on mythic status. I only recalled one title that was in it, Dan Simmons’ Crook Factory, but I knew there must be others in there from maybe George R.R. Martin or Greg Bear or Emma Bull or a collectible hardcover by some SF luminary. It was a small box that acquired supreme status.

Well, this morning I found it. Or, rather, I found the one title I specifically remembered, the Dan Simmons. Not in a box with other books from a worldcon, but in a plastic file box filled with old Scientific Americans. One book.

As soon as I saw it I realized that the rest of the box did not exist. I’d put this book in with these magazines to get it out of the way while I did…something. It then ended up at the bottom of one of the closets in my office, and would have remained there had I not got it in my head a few weeks ago to completely purge this space.

The bubble burst, all those other volumes—which, tellingly, I could not recall—have vanished in memory. They never existed.

Now, I have lost stories of my own before, put somewhere to wait until I got back to them…those are not mythical, and some of them were masterpieces which may never see the light of day again.

Quotes and Musings

As salve for the more astringent posts preceding, I thought I’d start putting up a series of some of my favorite quotes.  I began keeping these on a pad of legal paper years ago, anytime I came across something I really liked, thinking maybe one day I could use them as epigrams.  Well, the pages are starting to tear and I need to put them in some more permanent form.  So I’m going to put them here.  And continue the practice online.  Some days I may just put up one, others I’ll do a few.

Bear in mind that in many instances I do not necessarily agree with the sentiments expressed.  Often I disagree strongly, but the quote is fertile ground for debate, and that I welcome.

I put one up a few posts back, the one about equality from Roberto Calasso.  So now, here are a few more.  Enjoy.

“All great efforts to improve human beings by way of training are thwarted through the apathy of those who hold the sole feasible road to be that of stricter breeding.”  Charles Spearman, 1927

“Well, I mean, yes idealism, yes the dignity of pure research, yes the pursuit of truth in all its forms, but there comes a point I’m afraid where you begin to suspect that if there’s any real truth, it’s that the entire multidimensional infinity of the Universe is almost certainly being run by a bunch of maniacs.”  Frankie Mouse, Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy

“What the public wants is the image of passion, not passion itself.” Roland Barthes

“Persistence of the normal is strong.”  Barbara Tuchman