Afterimage

I finished the first draft of the new (old) novel, a rewrite of a rather pathetic bit of crime fiction that I just could not give up on.  The chapters are being reviewed as I write this.  I’m taking some time off.  I put in some long days on this and it still isn’t ready for prime time.

Meantime, something somewhat disturbing to keep the reader wondering, “Just where did he go that weekend and who—or what—was he with?”

Alien Detective copy 2To tell you the truth, I’m not sure myself.  I woke up in my own bed, but the room looked too normal.  I stumbled to the bathroom and decided the hat had to go, but it helped, and I’m not sure I can get through what’s to come without it.  I need a shave.

There’s missing time.  Someone else is missing it, though, I remember every second of it.

I may be in the mood for some alien jazz.  On the other hand, the Fool’s March is drumming in the background and my eye is pulsing in rhythm to the slipped and syncopated beat.  Another day in Memeopolis, no body but the killer must be caught.  It should be up to me, but who’s gonna trust a face like that?  See, the hat it essential.

Whatever happens, I will be played out.  After the last coda and the ink is dry, sleep.  Not a big one, just medium-sized.  There are too many more stories to figure out.

Have a nice world.

Published by Mark Tiedemann

2 comments on “Afterimage”

  1. Mark, I recently discovered your Asimov robot mystery books and they are absolutely BRILLIANT. I am a huge Asimov fan and have many early / first editions of the Foundation / Robot series. You captured Asimov’s robot world perfectly. I am SO happy that you are continuing to write novels. I am collecting all of your novels one by one :). Keep writing!! Your books are an absolute delight to read. Thank you for inviting us into “your worlds!”

    Rick Tewell

    1. Thank you for such a gracious response to my work. I appreciate your appreciation. I hope you enjoy “my” novels as much as the ones I did in the Good Doctor’s sandbox.

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